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Title: Tasting better than winter (one-off)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: BellDom
Rating: G/U
Beta: my personal Mrs. Santa, Holly ([livejournal.com profile] miss_ariake )! :D Huge THANK YOU!!! *hugs*
Summary: Based on the following prompt on [livejournal.com profile] mkmeme : First snowfall of the year, teen!belldom, everyone's getting excited but the boys just love running around in it, watching it fall, make Matt sing or do something stupid like that, catching snowflakes on their tongues and leading to kissing as the snow falls around them. As it's first snow, the ground would just be wet so no rolling around in the snow :')
Bonus points if they're not together at the start of the fic, but the ~magic of Christmas~ brings them together, lol.

Feedback: is as welcome as Xmas presents!!! ^_^
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, only my story. Should you steal it and I'll make sure Santa won't ever visit you! :P

Author's note: My first winter fic!!! This is a Christmas gift to the sweet Charlotte [livejournal.com profile] altogingenting to thank for all the love I received from her. She was among my first friends here and I hope we'll meet one day! ;) *hugs*

MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYBODY!
I hope this piece will warm your heart a bit! <3

 

Dominic rubbed his eyes sleepily and put the novel he was reading on the nightstand. He felt pleasantly tired and decided to go to bed, so after a few moments he slipped out of the warm covers and turned off the light. However, the blonde boy noticed the yellowish glow coming from the neighbouring house and he sneaked to the window, hoping that he would find out what they were up to at such a late hour.

 

The sight didn’t surprise Dominic, but his heart sank; his neighbour, classmate and, at the same time, his best friend sat stock-still at the window, pale hands cupping his own face. His name was Matthew and his blue eyes never ceased to gaze at the starless sky, despite the evident tiredness reflected in them. Dominic knew that his friend wasn’t waiting a spectacular view of a falling star or a lunar eclipse, but something simpler, however very endearing. He only found out about what bothered Matthew a few days ago, and he remembered their conversation at the time.

 

 

“Hey Matt, why are you pulling a long face? It’s the last day of school, cheer up!” Dominic said, patting the brunet’s shoulder when he met his friend in front of their classroom.

 

“Yeah, I know, but it’s already the 19th of December and we still don’t have any snow!” Matt yammered, and continued his complaint: “I hoped that this year we would have snow even before Christmas. Dude, how can I get in the mood if everything around me is unchanged?!” Matt stopped puckering his lips only when his friend nodded slightly in understanding.

 

 

However, Dominic was convinced that the Christmas spirit could not be only created by snowflakes; in his opinion it was a sentiment of love and gratitude that grew in one’s heart. Even though he wasn’t keen on snow, the boy’s prayer was the following that night:

 

“Dear God, please send us some snow, just a tiny bit of snow. You know, those tiny, frozen water crystals. We haven’t had snow for two years and I think you’d make my friend, Matt, extremely happy. Pretty please?”

 

No sooner had Dominic finished his petition than sleepiness overcame him.

 

* * * * *

 

The next morning when Dom opened his eyes, a bit of hope made his stomach to clutch, but he felt deceived when the world outside wasn’t fabulously white as he’d expected. His slow and constrained movements didn’t pass unnoticed, therefore his mother didn’t bug him with chores. There was a feeling of smothering in the atmosphere that lay heavily on him; he tried to watch a funny TV show and to read a science magazine, but just ended up wandering all about the house; absolutely nothing could engross him. His mother, who was baking gingerbread, furrowed her brows at her son’s weird behaviour and sent him upstairs to have a little nap. Dominic complied grudgingly, though when he finally enjoyed the softness of the bed he had to admit that it was a good idea. Within minutes he nodded off peacefully.

 

* * * * *

 

“Dom, Dom, wake up!”

 

What the heck is this noise? I’ll just sleep further…

 

“Oi, sleepy-head! Wake up, IT’S SNOWING!” a joyful voice squealed ever louder.

 

The bed bounced with the blonde boy, and he felt something warm that placed itself on his thighs and shook his shoulders gently. Fragile, brown eyelashes quivered as Dominic adjusted to the light and set his eyes on the well-known face of Matt. He grinned involuntarily at the honest and childish excitement written on his friend’s face; Dom’s grey eyes also lit up affectionately and they looked at each other until they heard the voice of Mrs. Howard, Dom’s mother, who interrupted their silent staring competition.

 

“Boys, I assume you want to go out, right?”

 

Both nodded eagerly. Dominic stretched himself and moaned like a kitten while he thanked gratefully in his mind for the first snowfall. He came back to earth when a long finger poked him in the ribs.

 

“Maaaatt!” he whined and glowered at his friend who continued to snicker.

 

“Hurry up, dude, the snow will melt by the time you get out of bed,” the brunet said while he looked out of the window.

 

“Matthew is right, sweetie,” his mum approved, “you should go and play now because I want you to be back for lunch. Okay?”

 

“Yeah, yeah,” the boys replied while they ran downstairs.

 

Dominic found his boots and put them on while Matt was already buttoning his coat. By the time Dominic wrapped his long neck in a soft, teal scarf, his friend tapped his left foot on the floor very impatiently, especially that the blonde boy ignored his pressings.  When his friend stepped to the mirror to arrange his fluffy hair, Matt couldn’t wait any more. He went up to Dom, snatched the matching teal cap out of his grasp and quickly pulled it over the fair locks.

 

“Come on, we have no time to waste! Or it’ll waste us!” Matthew cackled as he took hold of Dom’s forearm and dragged him outside.

 

They only stopped at the back of the huge garden to catch their breath and Dom could finally take a good look at the winter landscape. This was a relatively sheltered place; they lived in the margin of the village which was surrounded by a majestic sight of trees covered with a delicate layer of powdered sugar. He span around slowly and took in the breathtaking sight while Matt was cavorting on the country lane, his outstretched arms touching briefly the frosty shrubs just to assure himself that he wasn’t dreaming this. Dominic’s heart gave such a jump that he felt the spontaneous need to thank the gods for the unexpected surprise for them both. He clasped his cold hands and sighed silent, but honest words of thanks. He thought nobody heard him and therefore Matt’s following question startled him greatly.

 

“Thanks for what, Blondie?”

 

“M-Matthew, I didn’t know you were so close,” Dominic stuttered, awkwardly shifting from one foot to another and bowed his head to hide his flushed cheeks.

 

“Aw, come on, Dom, you can tell me,” the brunet spoke with silkiness tinting his voice, stopping in front of his friend, who looked at him with eyes wide with curiosity and hope.

 

His heart skipped a beat when Matthew lifted his hand, but he couldn’t be more deceived when the brunet brashly rubbed his cheeks with a handful of fresh snow, and then dashed away, burbling with laughter. Matthew thought Dom would chase him and they would run around like they always did, but instead the blonde boy remained in the same spot with his head bowed, focusing on the glittering ground.

 

He paced back carefully and halted beside Dominic, who didn’t even look up at him. Matthew gulped audibly, a bitter taste spreading in his mouth. He gently tugged on the arm of Dominic’s grey winter coat and whined imploringly.

 

“Dominic, hey… what’s the matter? Talk to me, Dommy, I hate it when you’re upset!”

 

The snow continued to fall peacefully, but Dom’s heart hid a violent snowstorm of feelings. He only dared a glimpse at the concerned face of his blue-eyed neighbour, though that was enough to make him shiver.

 

“Dooom, are you upset because I threw snow at you?” Matt asked apprehensively, and he bit his nails while waiting for the answer.

 

Dom shook his head and covered his face with his hands. He was so confused… Gathering all his courage, he let his hands fall; however, he lifted up his eyes to the pale sky and spoke hesitantly.

 

“I-I… just noticed that you were so sad lately. You weren’t pleased even when the winter holiday started, though you absolutely hate school,” Dominic paused and closed his eyes.

 

Matthew looked at him with wide eyes. He didn’t have to wait much for the continuation:

 

“And-and yesterday night you stared at that damn sky for hours, and I knew that you’d be devastated if it didn’t snow soon. So I, man, this is so awkward, I prayed that your wish would be fulfilled… “

 

“… and it worked,” Matthew completed with a huge grin plastered on his face. Though, his eyes were shinier than usual, proving that his friend’s gesture touched him deeper; it struck a very sensitive chord in his heart.

 

The tumult of emotions bubbled in him with such fervor; he became fidgety and slurred random ideas to a now smiling Dom:

 

“Oh, Dommy, you’re the best! How could I thank you? I’ve never had such an amazing friend as you. Hey, would you like me to sing something?”

 

Matthew didn’t wait for his friend’s answer (which would have been positive anyway), he started pirouetting around Dominic and he surprised him with a song he composed on the spot:

 

“Pretty snow is falling today

And many many thanks I say

To the blonde in front of me

The god of snow, my Dommy!”

 

They broke out into rollicking laughter, both teenagers so weak they had to sit down on a large rock with their backs to each other. They could both feel each other’s panting and body heat, although it was soothing and not disturbing or annoying. A few moments later, they remarked that the snowflakes dancing around them had definitely become bigger than the previous ones, stirring them to both simultaneously look up to the sky. Now their bodies were perfectly united, starting from their little bums through their spinal columns and finishing with their covered heads. They were each other’s support no matter what.

 

Two pairs of eyes were squinting at the pale sky which drizzled over them with fine snowflakes, determined to cover all and sundry. The incessant rhythm of the minuscule frozen crystals made them forget about everything; they were two souls in the eternal pureness of the snow’s whiteness.

 

Dominic got up on his feet and his friend turned back instantly at the loss of warmth pressed against him:

 

“Hey, where do you go?”

 

“To taste winter,” came the blonde’s odd answer which drew a confused expression on Matt’s face.

 

The mystery was solved when he saw Dominic bouncing with his pink tongue stuck out, trying to catch the fast snowflakes. Oh, he didn’t want to miss this, it looked so fun!

 

“I’m going to beat you at this, you know?” Matt noticed while hopping on one foot and he showed his sharp tongue out of his mouth.

 

“Yeah, right,” Dominic snorted, and pointed to a giant snowflake: “only with that catch I gain at least twenty points.”

 

Their funny banter went on for minutes, neither of them caring about making it a fair game: they pushed each other and appealed to all kind of tricks just to taste the biggest snowflakes. Dominic was so sure he would win this game and waited for the last frozen flake calmly, however Matt filched it under his nose.

 

The blonde could only gasp in shock and Matt danced a few seconds for his unequalled victory. He was approaching Dom with eyes that twinkled with joy and a smirk which softened to a kind smile as there were merely inches between them. Without warning, Matthew leaned in and his tongue brushed against Dominic’s full lips.

 

Realizing what he’d just done, the brunet came up with an excuse: “T-there was this absolutely big s-snowflake…”

 

Matthew’s flushed cheeks resembled Dominic’s who felt about uncertainly in the air until he found the pale fingers he wanted to hold so much. He looked shyly into the blue eyes which fascinated him since his early childhood, and whispered his question: “Did I taste as good as winter?”

 

Matt closed the distance between them and entwined their trembling fingers.

 

“No,” Dom’s face fell a little, but the brunet continued: “you tasted much better.”

 

They started pecking softly, coy smiles interrupting the touch of their cold lips. Matthew brought up his hands and cupped Dom’s face, the blonde wreathing his arms around the brunet. Matt first kissed Dominic’s red nose, which prompted a giggle from both of them, and then they finally kissed properly in the middle of a snow scene worthy of any fairytale, protected by the warmth of their thick clothes.

 

They hugged each other even more tightly when they broke the sweet kiss. Matthew rubbed his nose against Dom’s and breathed:

 

“Dommy… I believe you’re not the only one whose prayers have been answered.”

 

The round-eyed blonde asked him to continue while he pressed Matt’s cold palms against his hot cheeks.

 

“You see, as you prayed for snow in my name, I asked for, rather selfishly, a kiss from you… even for your love,” Matthew’s voice trailed off, and he kissed the little head that nestled in the crook of his neck.

 

“You needn’t have asked for it, it was always yours,” the delicious words delighted the brunet greatly, and he stole another kiss from those full lips.

 

”I love you, Dommy. Merry Christmas!”

 

“I love you too, Matty. Merry Christmas!”


Date: 2010-12-25 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altogingenting.livejournal.com
:')

That was beautiful! I absolutely loved it! <3

"we have no time to waste! Or it’ll waste us"
Knights of Cydonia? :P

This is so gorgeous :D I truly love it! Thank you soooo much!

This fic is just so adorable and cute and sweet and wonderful and brilliant and perfect and great ang amazing and awesome and fluffy and and.... so on for eternity!

Thank you so so so much! <3

"I hope we'll meet one day!"
I hope that as well! :D

*supermassive gigantic bear hugs*

Date: 2010-12-27 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Well, your awesome comment made me smile like Dommy:



LOL, I wasn't listening to KOC, it just clicked in my mind. :P

This fic is just so adorable and cute and sweet and wonderful and brilliant and perfect and great ang amazing and awesome and fluffy and and.... so on for eternity!

LOL *blushes and hides under the table*

I'm so so happyyou liked this story, it was my pleasure to write it! *cinnamon-scented hugs*

Date: 2010-12-25 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engel-sehnsucht.livejournal.com
Aww, so, so sweet! Brigi! <333 I loved it! :D

Date: 2010-12-27 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
:') So glad you liked it! *many hugs*

Date: 2010-12-25 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlight-myth.livejournal.com
I asked you before itself, can I smother you with hugs?! Because this was the most most most cutest, sweetest, adorable-est (i know there's no such word) thing I've ever read.

The beginning itself was so tender, when Dom saw Matt sitting at the window gazing up at the sky. My heart melted there.

his best friend sat stock-still at the window, pale hands cupping his own face.
Awww :'( To picture Matt sitting there, so lonely and sad makes me want to give him a gigantic cuddle!

We haven’t had snow for two years and I think you’d make my friend, Matt, extremely happy. Pretty please?”
Now I want to give Dom a gigantic cuddle! Isn't he like the sweetest friend!

they lived in the margin of the village which was surrounded by a majestic sight of trees covered with a delicate layer of powdered sugar.
I still marvel at the way you describe things! So beautiful!

And why was Dom so shy in telling Matt what he had wished for? Matty loved it anyways xD

My voice went all squeaky when I read that poem! It was so so pretty and to picture Matt singing that while dancing around in the snow would be such a wonderful sight!

Matt closed the distance between them and entwined their trembling fingers.
“No,” Dom’s face fell a little, but the brunet continued: “you tasted much better.”
OH MY LAWD! I can't bear the cuteness :3 :3 :3

“You see, as you prayed for snow in my name, I asked for, rather selfishly, a kiss from you… even for your love,”
CAN I HAZ MATT?! PWEASE! I WANNA KISS AND CUDDLE HIM FOREVER!!!

Brigi, this was so wonderful! Made my Christmas! xD

*hugs tight*

Here's a Belldom-y gif!

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Date: 2010-12-29 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
LOL it seems I didn't reply to your lovely comments! You are spoiling me with such kind words! :')

I asked you before itself, can I smother you with hugs?! Because this was the most most most cutest, sweetest, adorable-est (i know there's no such word) thing I've ever read.


<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

*wipes tears*

Seriously, it's so good to hear that readers find the boys as cute as me! :P

My voice went all squeaky when I read that poem! It was so so pretty and to picture Matt singing that while dancing around in the snow would be such a wonderful sight!

ZOMG I'm so glad somebody noticed it!!! I was squealing myself when I came up with it! *sends rain of chocolate over you*

Really, WHAT THE CHARLES DARWIN did I do to have such wonderful and amazing friends like you?!!! ^_^ *lets you adopt the boys and gives you infinite hugs*

Date: 2010-12-25 04:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] easilyglorious.livejournal.com
Very sweet, the way they both got their Christmas wishes!

<333

Date: 2010-12-27 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading, dear! <3

Date: 2010-12-25 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eskarlata.livejournal.com
Aww, so fluffy!! I love this versions of them xD Cute and innocent and stuff.
Dom´s prayer was so sweet <3 He´s such a good friend. And then Matt praying for a kiss, awww, gorgeous.

This image made me feel all warm inside:
They started pecking softly, coy smiles interrupting the touch of their cold lips.

A perfect Christmassy one-shot.

Date: 2010-12-27 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I love this versions of them xD Cute and innocent and stuff.

Aww, me too! :') I wish I had a friend like Dom, haha!

And then Matt praying for a kiss, awww, gorgeous.

Awww, thanks for your amazing comment, I can't stop smiling!

Date: 2010-12-25 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] showmeitsreal.livejournal.com
BEYOND cute- naww I wished it had snowed where I am for xmas!! :( What a lovely little story, merry christmas! <3 <3

Date: 2010-12-27 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you for your lovely comment! And your Dom icon is <333

I wished it had snowed where I am for xmas!!

We had snow before Christmas, and we have now but on Christmas it was raining. :O

Date: 2010-12-25 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] autumn-shudder.livejournal.com
that was sweet. I loved the part where they were both standing together in the snow and looking towards the sky. ♥ that was beautiful!

“Dommy… I believe you’re not the only one whose prayers have been answered.”
awww

a fantastic christmas story, darling!

Date: 2010-12-27 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Your icon is awesome! :D

I loved the part where they were both standing together in the snow and looking towards the sky.

<3 :') I always do that, haha!

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! *hugs*

Date: 2010-12-25 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
So so cute... this made me smile, thank you for posting!!

Date: 2010-12-27 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww, I'm so happy, dear! *hugs*

Date: 2010-12-26 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herverylowness.livejournal.com
So adorable! Love it!

Date: 2010-12-27 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
:D:D:D Thank you, I'm so happy!

Date: 2010-12-26 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farawisa.livejournal.com
sorry, i didn't comment earlier. i already read it, but somehow i didn't comment. weird.

loved it. really sweet. their prayers were so cute. dom's especially. wishing for snow for matt. just awwwwww!!!

and matt telling him he tasted better than winter. just too cute. loved it. great work. well done, brigi!!!

Date: 2010-12-27 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Oh, don't worry about commenting, I'm glad that you read it.

dom's especially. wishing for snow for matt. just awwwwww!!!

I just want to bounce in my room, but I don't want to wake up my neighbours. :P I'll explode with happiness, haha!

and matt telling him he tasted better than winter. just too cute

I'm so happy everybody liked it because I thought it was one of my best one-offs. :) *hugs*

Date: 2010-12-26 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
Aww, how cute! I love teen!Muse. :D

“You needn’t have asked for it, it was always yours."
So, so true.

This is lovely, especially on Christmas!

Date: 2010-12-27 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I love teen!Muse. :D

YOU TOO???? *jumps up and down*

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!

Date: 2010-12-28 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
Yes!!
(It might have something to do with the fact that it's the first thing I read. But still. :D)

Always! <3

Date: 2010-12-29 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Haha, Kiss kiss was among the first Belldom fics I've read, so it was certainly a very important factor when I decided to make a LJ account and start writing. :D

Your icon is sexy. :P

Date: 2010-12-29 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
Mine was "So In Like." :D
There's just something so different about them as kids and I've honestly never read bad Teen!Muse. (Then again, I've not tried writing it, so that's probably why.)

Thanks! I always love his little "cheers!" pose...and that bit of skin. I miss those clothes. :(

Date: 2010-12-29 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
So in like... ZOMG, I adore that one-off, I secretly keep it in my phone and reread it whenever i need 'awww' moments. <3

Oh shush, I'm sure your teen!muse story would be fabulous! ;) I'm quite the opposite, I have too many teen!muse fics. xD

Aww, I know. Though when Mr. Howard was standing not so far from me in his wetsuit, well, I didn't complain. :P Other *cough* bodyparts were accentuated. Jeez, I'm having pervy thoughts. xD

Date: 2010-12-29 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
I kind of have it bookmarked as well. ;)

Thanks for the vote of confidence, but there's certain genres I'm kind of not comfortable with yet (those being anything other than fluff, actually). Ooh, I think that means I need to go through your back catalogue! (Which I needed to do anyway, but esepcially now.)

The wetsuit. People hate it, but I'll always defend it. It's magical. :D

Date: 2010-12-30 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I've never wrote NC-17 stuff. O.o I don't think I ever will, haha. I just think it would be awkward and honestly, pwp can't be varied that much. But that's just my opinion, I love literature too much.

*blushes* Oh, you don't have to! Anyway, that reminds me I should make a list with my fics...

People hate the wetsuit?! :O Really? I had no idea! When I saw Dom entering the stage, I almost fainted because it was among the first times he wore it, and I had no idea. :P

Date: 2010-12-30 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
I understand about pwp, but sometimes you do just need to read some. (And I'm glad others write it.) I haven't even written a proper kiss yet, though.

I do! It's not like it'll be taxing or anything; I love your fic! :)

YES. There's a lot of wetsuit hate, actually. I saw them at Voodoo, which was Halloween weekend. I was fully expecting costumes, at least from Dom. And then he came out in the wetsuit. I may have screamed "OMG, IT'S THE WETSUIT!" My friend, who didn't know much about them at the time, looked at me like I'd lost my mind. I turned her around so she could see for herself and she became a Dom girl. :D

Date: 2010-12-31 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I know, I read pwp too, but mostly when I need entertainment. I don't think I'll ever be able to write a s scene, I bet even my kissing scenes are awkward and lame. I'm not experienced in this field. :P

:D:D:D I love to read stories about how people became Muse fans, it's interesting. Stacie, do you remember that last post on muse_secret, about someone becoming a hardcore Muse fan after reading BellDom? That was me. xD xD xD

Date: 2010-12-31 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
Pfft. Not that I've ever noticed!

Aww, really? That's awesome! (And I think that's interesting, too. Everyone's so different.)

Date: 2010-12-26 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] end1essly.livejournal.com
*lip tremble*

Now, wasn't that adorable???? I do like me some fluff, and that hit the spot :3

well done, dear :)

Date: 2010-12-27 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Yaaaay, I'm so glad you liked it!!! :)

Date: 2010-12-26 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashamedbliss.livejournal.com
THISWASMYPROMPTTHISWASMYPROMPTTHISWASMYPROMPTOMG

I just loved it so much, the whole idea of them kissing by catching the snowflakes was just brilliant, ah I loved it, so wonderful. I prompted this after our first snowfall, when I'd walked home, New Born playing in my ears and a grin on my face. This is so, so perfect.

Thanks for this, wifey :P *hugs tightly* ♥

Date: 2010-12-26 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I knew it was your prompt the whole time, haha! xD I had to bite my tongue not to tell you! :D I loved the prompt from the first time I read it and when I decided to write Xmas fics (and Charlotte requested a teen!muse fic), I knew this would be the perfect choice. :D

I'm glad you liked it! <33333 *muchos hugs and love*

*goes back to writing*

Date: 2010-12-27 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-ariake.livejournal.com
I said it was your prompt too when Brigi asked me to check it for her xD One needs new tactics when one is being anonymous, perchance? I joke of course, I think it's adorable and a lovely prompt. Maybe I'll write some of my own.

Date: 2010-12-27 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Maybe I'll write some of my own.

You mean for this prompt? :D:D:D WOOOW, that would be amazing!!! ;)

Date: 2010-12-27 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-ariake.livejournal.com
Lucky me, I got to read this before everyone else and I consider that to be such an honour! I'm glad I could get it done in time for you and if you ever need help with betaing again, just let me know on Facebook ^_^ I'm happy to help, especially as I get to read such beautiful and fluffy fics like this.

They were each other’s support no matter what.

I really liked this part as well, the two of them supporting each other both physically and mentally. Despite all their childish antics, they both really care for each other and hold a special place in each other's heart ^^ That was such a beautiful image of them both, Brigi; you really have a wonderful way of writing teen!Muse where all the innocence is there but with strong emotions all written perfectly.

“You needn’t have asked for it, it was always yours,”

<3 Some serious love coming your way for this gorgeous sentence, this really brought a warm smile to my face and I still can't stop grinning about how cute and touching it is.

Absolutely stunning, a sweet little fic for the Christmas season and one I'll always remember and love greatly <3 *hugs*

Date: 2010-12-27 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Haha, I should be thanking YOU, not vice versa! :P

*reads further and starts crying* How... why do I deserve all your incredibly FLATTERING comments? <3

I like that you always see what's beyond words, the hidden meaning. I think every author would like such an attentive reviewer as you!

you really have a wonderful way of writing teen!Muse where all the innocence is there but with strong emotions all written perfectly.

OMG, thank you so much! *hugs tightly* I am so glad that I can express the special way teenagers feel, and I just have to make them innocent, it suits them. :P

Awww, Holly, you're such a great friend! Always making me happy with your words which are magical. *gives you lots of muffins and roses*

Date: 2010-12-27 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muse-manticore.livejournal.com
Aww. So sweet it almost made me cry. Perfect. <3<3<3

Date: 2010-12-27 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
:') Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you liked it, dear! *hugs*

Date: 2010-12-27 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muse-manticore.livejournal.com
I like that gif but.....wtf is he doing lol.
Apart from the pervy grin I mean.

Date: 2010-12-27 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
LOL I love you xD You made me lolstenwholme even though I have a migraine. :P

Oh, you don't know the gesture? It's the way Japanese people thank for something. :) That's why I posted it, not because I had a pervy smile on my face, haha!

Date: 2010-12-27 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muse-manticore.livejournal.com
hehehe was he in Japan then?
He loves Japan, it's the only place he can get clothes that fit him off the peg.
I know how he feels :/ I'm a fuck load shorter than him.
Oh dear I rambled again. I just don't seem to have the hang of keeping a comment as a comment. :/

I've got to go ring the boyfriend and talk filth for an hour. *waggles eyebrows*

Date: 2010-12-27 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
I have no idea from which video this was made...

Haha, I don't mind rambling! :P I don't have problems with clothes as height, but the other way around :/ if you understand what I mean. *blushes*

Hahaha, you seriously make me laugh so much! :D Well, I only posted some new fic. :P

Date: 2010-12-27 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muse-manticore.livejournal.com
Maybe it's a private porn vid. Hand porn!

Aww. Huggledysquish!
I try and get stuff to fit me, it's all too long, trailing on the floor, I mean seriously they put sleeves on them that could fit a gibbon!
It's bonkers!
At least my tin foil hat still fits but then I made that meself! hehehe.

I think I broke the phone! At least he was happy :D

Date: 2015-12-12 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamarelmensdorp.livejournal.com

Nothing beats teen!muse and first kisses. This way I might even like snow.

Date: 2015-12-13 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Haha, not a big fan of snow myself either, but it's cute when you imagine the guys playing in it. ;)

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