you seriously hit this one out of the park! omg i can't believe this is real!!! it is SO BEAUTIFUL and perfect! i love everything about it, from their star wars vs star trek battle, the way they kept bumping into each other, the way they got more comfortable around each other, how their incredible gifts matched up to be perfect for their date, i just CANNOT!!!!!
a few of my fav bits, though i seriously could highlight the entire thing:
Dom greeted him with “May the fourth be with you!” on the day he was hired, and that was when he was lost for Matthew since Matthew was the biggest Star Trek fan ever.
i love that dom was a hot guy, yet so comfortable with his geeky tendencies that he greeted matt that way. it was just too cute! and matt being all huffy about loving star trek is hilar!
“Don’t know his name, man. I don’t think I’ve seen him before. It was that dude in the suit,”
i am SUCH a sucker for them doing secretly generous, kind things for each other, so this was beautiful to read!
“I do, if I could watch it from inside, wrapped in a warm blanket,” Dominic said as he crushed the mint leaves with his straw.
awww cuddly dom! i see both of these guys wrapped in a warm blanket together in the future! ;D
He giggled at certain parts and Dom just looked at him and broke out in a smile, inspiring each other with confidence.
omg a karaoke scene!!! confession: i HATE singing karaoke, but i am in love with karaoke in fics, so this was adorable! also, i commend you for picking such a cool song. i don't think i've ever seen mr. bright side used in a fic before!
He took out his phone and was about to text Dominic when cold fingers stroked his nape.
“Surprise!” Dominic exclaimed and laughed when Matt shouted ‘Jesus!’.
“No, it’s just me,” the blond said with a smile, took off his warm coat and scarf and threw them on the other armchair.
ahhhh! omg so cute! and dom touching the nape of matt's neck unf. dom is so cute and playful, i love it!
“You are amazing,” was all Matthew could say before he put his arms around Dominic’s neck and he pressed his lips urgently against Dom’s.
YES! omg i love that matt just went for it. it so fits with the character you created and it's just perfect!
finally, i adore the way you wrapped everything from the photography to the magazine cover to their gifts working together to everything! it just tied up in a pretty little belldom bow and i am so grateful. thank you so much!!!! <333 merry christmas!!!
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Date: 2013-12-23 09:13 pm (UTC)you seriously hit this one out of the park! omg i can't believe this is real!!! it is SO BEAUTIFUL and perfect! i love everything about it, from their star wars vs star trek battle, the way they kept bumping into each other, the way they got more comfortable around each other, how their incredible gifts matched up to be perfect for their date, i just CANNOT!!!!!
a few of my fav bits, though i seriously could highlight the entire thing:
Dom greeted him with “May the fourth be with you!” on the day he was hired, and that was when he was lost for Matthew since Matthew was the biggest Star Trek fan ever.
i love that dom was a hot guy, yet so comfortable with his geeky tendencies that he greeted matt that way. it was just too cute! and matt being all huffy about loving star trek is hilar!
“Don’t know his name, man. I don’t think I’ve seen him before. It was that dude in the suit,”
i am SUCH a sucker for them doing secretly generous, kind things for each other, so this was beautiful to read!
“I do, if I could watch it from inside, wrapped in a warm blanket,” Dominic said as he crushed the mint leaves with his straw.
awww cuddly dom! i see both of these guys wrapped in a warm blanket together in the future! ;D
He giggled at certain parts and Dom just looked at him and broke out in a smile, inspiring each other with confidence.
omg a karaoke scene!!! confession: i HATE singing karaoke, but i am in love with karaoke in fics, so this was adorable! also, i commend you for picking such a cool song. i don't think i've ever seen mr. bright side used in a fic before!
He took out his phone and was about to text Dominic when cold fingers stroked his nape.
“Surprise!” Dominic exclaimed and laughed when Matt shouted ‘Jesus!’.
“No, it’s just me,” the blond said with a smile, took off his warm coat and scarf and threw them on the other armchair.
ahhhh! omg so cute! and dom touching the nape of matt's neck unf. dom is so cute and playful, i love it!
“You are amazing,” was all Matthew could say before he put his arms around Dominic’s neck and he pressed his lips urgently against Dom’s.
YES! omg i love that matt just went for it. it so fits with the character you created and it's just perfect!
finally, i adore the way you wrapped everything from the photography to the magazine cover to their gifts working together to everything! it just tied up in a pretty little belldom bow and i am so grateful. thank you so much!!!! <333 merry christmas!!!