You know that I've been waiting for this since the day you mentioned the idea you had from that piece of news. And the idea sounded interesting and it definitely was and I'm happy that you wrote this!
I really liked how the story began and how Dom ended up seeing poor Matt up there alone with a knife. And Dom was so brave when he wanted to try to rescue that unknown boy.
The little body shivered as a gust of wind raved and Dominic watched the brunet locks dancing in the air, until a pale hand put them right behind a small ear.
Ah, I liked the way you described things, I always do. Matt seemed somehow delicate at this moment ^ and I could picture that so well in my mind (for a moment I imagined Matt as a little bird which shivers in the cool winter wind. Don't know where that came from). And when Matt opened up (“Have you ever felt that...."), I felt so bad and my eyes moistened. Poor Matt. And poor Dom, too! Life hadn't been fair to them :(
But luckily Matt ended up safe! And the ending made me smile, aww. So many thoughts going through my mind and so many emotions too, but all I can say is that I loved this. Very good job, Brigi ♥ Thank you! (and now I can go to bed)
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Date: 2011-07-17 09:07 pm (UTC)I really liked how the story began and how Dom ended up seeing poor Matt up there alone with a knife. And Dom was so brave when he wanted to try to rescue that unknown boy.
The little body shivered as a gust of wind raved and Dominic watched the brunet locks dancing in the air, until a pale hand put them right behind a small ear.
Ah, I liked the way you described things, I always do. Matt seemed somehow delicate at this moment ^ and I could picture that so well in my mind (for a moment I imagined Matt as a little bird which shivers in the cool winter wind. Don't know where that came from). And when Matt opened up (“Have you ever felt that...."), I felt so bad and my eyes moistened. Poor Matt. And poor Dom, too! Life hadn't been fair to them :(
But luckily Matt ended up safe! And the ending made me smile, aww. So many thoughts going through my mind and so many emotions too, but all I can say is that I loved this. Very good job, Brigi ♥ Thank you! (and now I can go to bed)