I adore this fic. Its so lovely to read. I like how youre building up the other characters too, not just Matt and Dom, I feel like Im stepping into this other world really.
"Matt watched with awe as Dom spoke. As he was talking about his dreams, Matt couldn’t help but notice how his eyes widened; they were an incredible colour… an interesting mixture of green and grey, like an uncut aquamarine." That was such a lovely paragraph. There was something sweet about this entire piece, the muffins, the tentative gestures between Matt and Dom. x
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Date: 2010-08-03 12:45 pm (UTC)"Matt watched with awe as Dom spoke. As he was talking about his dreams, Matt couldn’t help but notice how his eyes widened; they were an incredible colour… an interesting mixture of green and grey, like an uncut aquamarine." That was such a lovely paragraph. There was something sweet about this entire piece, the muffins, the tentative gestures between Matt and Dom. x