Loved that Dom finally decided to apologise for what he did. And I really like it that his sister set in in the right track.
The last part with Matt and his grandmother was really nice. =)
As someone already pointed out, I can't wait for Dom to hear Matt playing. ;P
Loved this bit:
Matt watched with awe as Dom spoke. As he was talking about his dreams, Matt couldn’t help but notice how his eyes widened; they were an incredible colour… an interesting mixture of green and grey, like an uncut aquamarine. Matt’s mind was like an encyclopaedia; everything that he ever had read about this mysterious gem flashed across his mind.
I like it how Matt's mind just wanders while Dom is speaking. xD
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Date: 2010-07-20 08:08 pm (UTC)Loved that Dom finally decided to apologise for what he did. And I really like it that his sister set in in the right track.
The last part with Matt and his grandmother was really nice. =)
As someone already pointed out, I can't wait for Dom to hear Matt playing. ;P
Loved this bit:
Matt watched with awe as Dom spoke. As he was talking about his dreams, Matt couldn’t help but notice how his eyes widened; they were an incredible colour… an interesting mixture of green and grey, like an uncut aquamarine. Matt’s mind was like an encyclopaedia; everything that he ever had read about this mysterious gem flashed across his mind.
I like it how Matt's mind just wanders while Dom is speaking. xD
You did a good job with this. =D