You know, this story would be so different if I were to write it now, but this was born right after I finished high school, and I was still rather naive. xD As you're commenting, I'm re-reading the chapters. Glad you say that their behaviour seems genuine, because I think I messed up the dialogue, it sounds too fancy in this context. xD
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Date: 2015-12-09 02:51 pm (UTC)